The feedback I received on my last elevator pitch was very positive. Everyone had very kind and constructive responses, which I enjoyed reading. Everything stood out to be since it was all kind. I tried to speak more clearly and show greater dynamic such as vocal variety, in order to cultivate audience engagement -- though I feel like these are the things I struggle with the most. Everyone seemed to like the social and environmental consciousness attached to the pitch and how I emphasized the business being constructed from a passionate cause.
I didn't really change anything from my last pitch, as the feedback suggested it was sufficient, though I am open to receiving any constructive criticism! I found that compared to the last two times it was a lot easier to be in front of the camera and speak as I pitch my idea even if I had changed my idea. I still messed up a few times but I feel as though it's not as bad as before. The more I practice the pitch, the easier it seems to be which really highlights my progress in building these vital entrepreneurship skills.
Hey Liana, another great elevator pitch! I thought that you were very poised in your delivery of your pitch. You can see that you speak with heart and passion. This idea is very important to you and you seem like you would give everything you had to make your dream a reality. As I have said in the past, I think your idea is awesome. I would invest! You should be proud of the work that you have done this semester. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteLiana:
ReplyDeleteI watched your “Elevator Pitch No.3.” you have your business’s plans and ideas that is all count. Looked like, you practiced a lot because you have more confident front of the camera than two previous “Elevator pitch.” I do like your idea about social and environmental consciousness attached to the pitch that you emphasized the business being constructed from a passionate cause. Good job.
Good work Liana, this was well done. I particularly liked your mentioning "Principles" being the differentiating factor between your coffee shop and the corporate brands. Principles are what guides a business or country in the long term. Principles are what makes sure that we do what is right for the future instead of what is easy right now. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteHi Liana,
ReplyDeleteDunkin Donuts is actually trash so good riddance to that place and Starbucks is overpriced. The convenience of these businesses and their span can be daunting for growing coffee businesses. You should look into composting coffee beans. Apparently, Starbucks give these away. I may have read that on your blog, if so sorry for the crappy feedback. You should include composting of coffee bean into your community trips though because it's a resource that's readily available and otherwise considered waste.